There's some striking images in this. I particularly like the bad guy flying in the middle of page six and him hypnotizing the guard at the bottom of the same page. Any chance of posting the story before, though? I felt the in media res made this a little difficult to follow.
There's some striking images in this. I particularly like the bad guy flying in the middle of page six and him hypnotizing the guard at the bottom of the same page. Any chance of posting the story before, though? I felt the in media res made this a little difficult to follow.
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